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sibilant seduction

bytodski28©

a glance compromises the senses,
promises silently spoken,
time stills, snakes sinuously
realise
how soft
how smooth
how sensual she is
sinking in silken thrall

skins surface, exquisite as
polished glass,
organic obsidian
seduces the fingertips,
a single stroke causes
shivering sexuality,
to trace her flesh
is to be lost in lust

slowly slip, slide down her spine
her side, her thighs
deep stare penetrates her eyes,
sensitive strokes on carnal instincts,
circles, spheres, Ovals
her cries and sighs mine to prize.

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by theoncomingstorm09/26/13

I really can't say much but wow to this one... The words are potent, powerful, and drawing from me desire and lust

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by Angeline09/20/13

Sibilant Indeed

and very well written. You've matched the pacing of the poem to its meaning and that is very very good. The whole sssseduction unfolds for the reader through a haze of lust. And if that isn't good eroticmore...

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by Ashesh909/20/13

to trace her flesh ....

is to be so lost in lust ..........
Whoa , Tod ....beware La Femme sans Merci ........5-ed !

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