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Click hereWickedEve may find a couple lines in hee that jolt her deja vu banks
SIC TRANSIT
By Carl Edgar Law aka JCSTREET © 2006, all rights reserved
The past is past and
that which is done is done but
time’s past passes still and still past
is present and fidgets
fossicks
in the yearning spaces, spaces
of the heart the dart
of you
slices more deeply than rain more
visceral than sharp butter on a morning crumpet more than
a thrown triangle into the sun, I
yes I
but you
are you I thought
a part of I and I you but
nevermore perhaps and that’s
what passes plangently the
lambence of your
crooked smile, the limning
of the light at night as we
falterfall together in a fugue
of limerance the glimmerings
of new life formed in love the
irreplaceable
unfathomable
connection of some dark thing
some bright glim of bondage something
half-sensed
but binding
binding and binding but we falter
as head rules heart meets heart
rules head
as a tidal bore, melding and writhing but spent
too soon, too soon
the clash of heart and head
besots us with yearnings and pain, we
fall bedraggled to more
distant shores
from which
to arrow discontents
until
the drawing in of night brings yet again the reaching
out of hands to clutch, the reaching out of
heart to heal
heal
but the head does not
heal
that which two hearts can heal two heads
cannot
cannot heal, we
wrench the scabs to wring anew
sweet drops sweet
drops upon the tongue with the high iron
taste, the
hot heave of heavy heart the
writhings of the heart
and magic
when all else fails then magic
walks abroad but fails at dawn, the grey
dulse on the eyes with its dull damp the
weariness of yet another sunrise to be
recked till night
brings on again the loss of love’s
fire, love’s
tormenting trysts, I
had a dream that
I did arise and go now to
Mongolia,
Mongolia where yak herders are in sharp
demand
and sally in the dun dawn slathered
in yak’s butter, wearing
a wolf-skin and in the beaten-down wheat of the steppe write
paeans to the dark
shadows of your belly, idylls
of incomprehension, I will
I will say – “serves her right” and then
relent and repent be
not right but contrite as the woolly beasts
whimper and stamp
rolling in yellow mud after rain and
at night
take my hurt to the yurt and eschew
the wassail bowls passed freely by
wizened oriental men
while women conjure cauldron things with the
vague odours of your skin
when you yielded
and became careless of your elegance
daring to dance the lovely gavotte of no mind, the
dangerous dance of chance
encounters with your delicious demons, your
night dreams and dream I will
of your wuffle-snuffle mewlings in the dark the
sudden shifts and flails of your light limbs
cosseted in your convent nightie and
sensible undies
of the deep sighs you make as you come into my arms in sleep and kiss and murmur
and fill me with delight
I will dream of the times we skipped stones on the surface of the moon
rippling out to Jupiter
into the hinterland of plasmic moss and marsh the
interplanetary fastness the
past is just the past until
it passes once more with the sharp tug of a puppy
on a short leash
into the softening heart with its
hardening reality
it’s duality and
lack of possibility
its fluidity and mercuriality
draining purpose
“go with the flow”, but what of the flow
to nothingness, the flow
over the precipice, the flow
to the place where marzipan congeals and is too dry
to limn the tongue with crystal, your kiss
was just another explosion of mint
until it broke the cobwebs that had bound me
to winter’s hopeless silence, before I knew
that you had passed my way, night and day with another
while I dreamed of you and knew
that you
were just beyond my reach and could teach me
to love again
and to be loved
as best you could for you too
wrestled with the dark beast
that dogs us all, the inner
child
unfed
un-nurtured and crying still
but unbeknownst for he and she
are buried too deeply in the drear of forgotten memory
to be called into the healing heart
Part II
Out there, under a skillet moon I
dreamed of you, how you
moulded to me, how I
enfolded you with my dark love my
imperfections, how I
failed to know, how I
failed
to know
that which was you and needed
to be heard and
loved for what it was and no more
no less, just
that which was you and is you, that which
you do not know and which
I perhaps knew more but I
did not know much, I did not know
much so
now I ride
ride with the catafalque of our love
each night
planting
kisses from your mourning greys
your kitten cats your sweet
companions, they
mourn for us and I place their kisses
softly on your eyes and
seal them with a scarcely-fallen
tear
torn from a deeper place than
you will know perhaps and
teased from me
teased from me by the memory
of your sweet small feet in sandals, bowing down
to taste and suckle
tickle with my tongue cuz it made you laugh
and laughingly we went to bed with high heart and
low morals
and things that we speak not of in high light but
remember well in twilight and the nighness of night and this
is only one of many songs to be sung and rung up
in the burying place of the heart
the hurrying spaces of lability
as the affect prances from disbelief to relief from
pain to the faint hope of a whispered voice on the answerphone
faint and fainter still for it presages only more
anomie
the animated tryst of darkness and light tonight
a borealis
of desire unfounded
I walk the high wire of un-
requited desire this, desire
for the un-named thing, the thing
we could never name that bound us
to the past the wake
running back into sharp tears of surprise but
bound us too in the high hot heat of summer in a different
clutch
much of which might have been
the sight and sound of you in your
long cotton dress your
big straw hat
running away from me down through the long corn until I
wrenched, wrung and wrestled you down to
histrionic struggle cuz you
wanted it, wanted
whatever it was
we had
down down in the long corn those
wistful rows in the high hot
heat
you struggled
because I had bought you two, one for
the ripping of and the
ripping off how you
squealed and fought
until I pinioned you and just when
you surrendered
I got a cellphone call from Paul
who wanted I don’t remember what and we could not
get that back
whatever it was
we wanted
in the high hot heat you whispered
icily
“treat me nicely” and
your whisper glistered on my skin with the lightness
of a bunny-scamper
in the high hot heat you sighed
“treat me gently” and I
didn’t
to your great relief
giving instead
what you needed
in the high hot sere
of summer
now
the gloam and glim and gloom of winter
draw in without your touch and yet you
are so near I
walk past your curtain-shrouded lair
where you rule on school for the newly-minted though
yet unruly
didacts of the future
me
in my North Face parka and
balaclava to which
my moustache sticks I see you
shrouded and bent
over your keyboard puzzling it all out and I
want to shout
your name
over and over because
I am a fool, a tool of the unquiet
heart
because you see thee
and me could never be
decoupled yet unruffled it is too
heart-hard shards of it
cling they
sting and wring
what ifs
you beat in my breast with the soft waft
of a thrushes wing you bring
all things to bear on my steel places they
buckle as you suckle at me and tease
and giggle
uncharacteristically
yes you do
occasionally
essay
uncharacteristicality
and this duality, this quality of abstrusity that dogs us
drives our dyad quite mad in mail and phone and my
unexpected arrivals in that old rusty car that shivers
all the lace curtains in the street that
redolence of your first
drive-in kiss but my
economic station
is of my own creation, though
mileage may vary
though I’m wary, even chary of the
clowns who frown at my apparent
cupidity my
not nine-to-five fluidity
of economic purpose
which were the deal makers, which
the breakers or was it just
the slow seepage of limerance into despond
the dull decay of beatings on the heart
the floundering of great vessels in a quagmire
of relentless restitutions I am
weary now of the past what’s
past is past and
that which is done is done but
time’s past passes still and
still past is present and fumble-tumbles me
into the pale now past’s palpable
shadows of relentless regret, past’s
memory of your you-ness, past’s
memory of you as water kisses swan’s down as
your face
mirrors my tears. –30-
I still haven't read it all.
I'm trying to see if anything jolts the deja vu banks.
Bondage and yak butter?
...of the language is obvious. Your pen is smooth and gentle in a way that can not be taught.
I do not sense a wholeness in the poem, however, as I did with "Stones." It feels liked a somewhat forced tour-de-force, whereas stones felt more like something you were discovering as you meandered through a maze.
Some of the repetitions and line breaks seem more affected here. That is said not as criticism (since your work is such a pleasure to read and ponder), but as critique, to give you one more little thought to mull over in case you were planning on trying to improve the overall texture of the poem.
It is indeed a pleasure to be seeing work from you again.
Writng a clever, original engaging epic. Love the line breaks, original metaphor and word usage. Great to be reading you again, you old rascal.
A marathon, yes, but you ran six extra miles! Some wonderful images but it simply goes on too long. Unlike "stones," which pulled me headlong through each piece and vision, this one wanders off the main path for too often.
Good to see your work, though.
Fly
that was a marathon! There were a few things that jarred the "hurt in the yurt" line almost killed this for me and the cell phone seemed an invasion but I suppose that is exactly what it was. In whole this is an amazing piece but some of the line breaks grated on me, not enough to over-whelm the power of this poem however...wonderful write, great imagery. thank you Sabina