Silent Echos

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bluerains
bluerains
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Imbibed dreams
Ricocheted apparitions
lurking beneath
painted waterfalls
Chantilly lace by
the seawall
Reflected dust upon
the pillowcase
Dried tears the cenotaph
Innate residue of home

bluerains
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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Cenotaph

Sparse and tensely written.

I enjoy it when I have to look up an occasional word.

Are you sure "cenotaph" is just what you mean?

The dictionary meaning is basically a tomb/monument for someone who is buried elsewhere.

Perhaps it would be clearer to me if the final line began with "For" ?

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
great use

of language once again.

A slide show of powerful images and feelings

nicely done

thank you

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