- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Silent Zen
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Click hereSilent focus onto the self,
vaporizing thoughts into the quietude,
Fading me........... emerging MORE........
du May 10 2005
- COMMENTS
quietpoetalmost 19 years agoThere is an old philosophy among the Japanese on the art of haiku, that in one's life they should write one perfect haiku. While this isn't a haiku, it is a great example of saying much in few... kind of like the dying art of listening, REALLY listening! Enjoyed this!
QP
Wanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago"less is more" applies. This was a seed pearl of a poem, Du! As always with zen poetry, to capture the tranquility is the thing, and in this instance, you did it in such few, but meaningful words. Reading it almost put Me to sleep! Oh, not out of boredom, but out of pure peaceful serenity. <yawning, but smiling> Thank you Du for the zen lullabye.
Vixxx
My Erotic Talealmost 19 years agoMore in every breath of nothingness, excellent, what more need be said, meditation in excellence or life of zen!
Nobody do it like the Du do! another pearl of a poem! Art~
