Skid

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DeniseNoe
DeniseNoe
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Hesitation
A second
     no, less

    Quick
       I
Footbrakeflat
Armturnwheel
      All the way
           the right way
          But

Too late

I was
    too late
A second
    no, less
One gasp
     Two lives
     Screaming
          Too late


Metalspeed
Skin and bone
Cannot resist
     Metalspeed

Humans don't scream
    like wheels
Screaming
     metalspeed
     Once  
A forever Once

I braked and I turned
    but
Hesitation
     A second
          no, less
I braked and
Turned the wheel
like
I was supposed to
    Right
      but not
         Right on Time

Destroyer
     KillerKiller
Badpersonmonster
     Killer
Because I braked and
     Turned
     Too late

A gasp too late
     A tear too late
A second
     no, less
     but too late
Too late
    To avoid the
     Skid

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Previously published in “artisan.”

DeniseNoe
DeniseNoe
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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 15 years ago
Good to go for the masses

For me, it was a pleasure to see you allowing yourself to play around, presumably not too worried here about presenting as 'edgy' or speaking the latest poetic short hand lingo. This poem on the other hand, was flowing effortlessly, happy and playful (despite the subject) and I enjoyed it for it.

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
Badpersonmonster

I like how some of your words skidded into each other. :)