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Click hereHesitation
A second
no, less
Quick
I
Footbrakeflat
Armturnwheel
All the way
the right way
But
Too late
I was
too late
A second
no, less
One gasp
Two lives
Screaming
Too late
Metalspeed
Skin and bone
Cannot resist
Metalspeed
Humans don't scream
like wheels
Screaming
metalspeed
Once
A forever Once
I braked and I turned
but
Hesitation
A second
no, less
I braked and
Turned the wheel
like
I was supposed to
Right
but not
Right on Time
Destroyer
KillerKiller
Badpersonmonster
Killer
Because I braked and
Turned
Too late
A gasp too late
A tear too late
A second
no, less
but too late
Too late
To avoid the
Skid
*
Previously published in “artisan.”
For me, it was a pleasure to see you allowing yourself to play around, presumably not too worried here about presenting as 'edgy' or speaking the latest poetic short hand lingo. This poem on the other hand, was flowing effortlessly, happy and playful (despite the subject) and I enjoyed it for it.