- Erotic Poetry
- Slave's Sonnet
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Click hereWhy should your slave submit to your cruel whip,
and lay him down and offer you his back,
awaiting leather strap or gentle lips,
accepting your soft kisses or hard smacks?
Should not your slave rise up and break his chains
and take you hard into his shackled hands,
and carry you to bed, despite his pains,
and lay you down, despite your stern commands?
And pin your wrists and crush you with his weight,
and bite your tender nipples 'til they sting,
and force apart your thighs with his bald pate,
and tongue your burning bush until you sing?
Such liberties, my Mistress should excuse,
for well she knows, my fate is Her's to choose.
- COMMENTS
Gurualmost 19 years agoA sonnet is very difficult and time consuming to write. To write one well, as you have done, is much more difficult. Bravo!
My Erotic Taleover 19 years agookay this was a prime example
of sonnet. excellent work
descriptive and visual
also enlightening~
YDDalmost 20 years agoAn interesting effort in a restrictive form.
You should get points for attempting it.
You could easily remove the strain from a few rhymes, And there must be an alternative to "bald pate", even if it is descriptive.
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoI see your first poetry submission is a sonnet. Glad you tried a more challenging form instead of a simple rhyming pattern.
