damned stealthy thief
kidnapper of lively limb
a mind rolled in
where belief's suspended
and Alice finds the mirror's slick illusion
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Cripes .... I had to look up 'diaphanous' and 'lute', but it was well worth it.
Could be sleep, or the big sleep very well written butters and though provoking 5ed
a shaky container ship
with the cargo of our dreams
that broke in furrow of the waves
to awake in paralysis
and silent screams
I voted - 5
curse ????? thnx for opening up this debate / line of thinking : 5-ed .
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