sleep

bybutters©

damned stealthy thief
kidnapper of lively limb
wrapper of
a mind rolled in
diaphanous dreams
where belief's suspended
lute's
upended
and Alice finds the mirror's slick illusion

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by Magnetron07/09/14

Cripes .... I had to look up 'diaphanous' and 'lute', but it was well worth it.

5

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by todski2807/03/14

duality here

Could be sleep, or the big sleep very well written butters and though provoking 5ed

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by twelveoone07/03/14

Sleep

a shaky container ship
with the cargo of our dreams
that broke in furrow of the waves
to awake in paralysis
and silent screams
I voted - 5

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by Ashesh907/03/14

sleep : is it a blessing or a .....

curse ????? thnx for opening up this debate / line of thinking : 5-ed .

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