- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Sleep Too Heavy To Dream
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Click hereAlways saw a
shadow about you,
thought he was in it.
Didn’t know it
was his shadow
falling
on your every night.
- COMMENTS
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agoheartbreaker there is in this,
when we discover the dreams..
are nightmares..
into reality, that we were mixed
in thought, of absence..
-sGp-
Anonymousabout 19 years agoThis short work cuts to the chase. I love how you positioned the words... short jabbing slicing ... with a slow gray that clouds over the ending..
ty for the read..
Du~
sophia janeabout 19 years agodisagree with the comment that you should take out the 3rd line. I think it's right the way it is.
twelveooneabout 19 years agoI think you can take out the third line, it is redundant, would make it tighter, strenghen the rest even more so.
