- Erotic Poetry
- Sleeping girl
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She's curled up in my bed.
I'm laying on the floor,
imagining the curvature of her hip.
Perhaps it's angular and bony.
Perhaps the line turns gently;
a lazy wave upon a gritty beach.
My friend, my beautiful amazing friend,
how I long to feel your thighs around my cheeks and mouth.
I yearn to taste you and know the texture of your body.
You sleep. The curves of my body remind me that I dream.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 13 years agoAsking someone to correctly distinguish between lay and lie here at illiterotica.com is a hopeless task.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoLoved your poem--very concrete, evocative images.
Just make sure you get the right verb--it should be "lie" not "lay." (Unless, of course, you are laying someone or laying something or someone down.) By the way--your audio "phone slut" is mindblowing! Please do more--your voice alone mesmerizes! Would love to have a drink sometime.
