Slow and Deliberate

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Slow and Deliberate

Her mind viscous
Honey like
Thick with desire
Slow and deliberate

Eyes opened wide
Seeing everything
And, nothing
Frozen in trance

Enveloped in silence
Captured in a vacuum
Peaceful and disquieted
Listening for a sign

Body quivering
Gooseflesh taking flight
Dizzy with euphoria
Spinning into ecstasy

His tongue dances
Upon clitoris’s tip
Watching his Miss
Burst, liquefy, and then evaporate

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Quivering Quill
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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
nicely turned, sounds like you put your tongue in it! good to have you back

good grammar, clitoris's is perfect for possessive, well done

"Although plural nouns that end in s take only an apostrophe, singular nouns that end in s take an apostrophe + s – the boss's office, James's dog, Lois's friends, Mr. Jones's car."

HarryHillHarryHillalmost 11 years ago

nice, tight, concise

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 11 years ago
tinglingly ....

exquisite .......erotica !!!