tagErotic PoetrySo Completely

So Completely

byMzFly©

I scare myself sometimes
The way I want you so completely
How much I am willing to risk
How much I would give

To taste the need in your kiss
The salt and sex on your lips
The feel of your skin beneath me
I want you so completely

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by Anonymous06/17/14

Wow! MzFly, - "So Completely" - Is Amazing!

"The feel of your skin beneath me."

It's like you're speaking directly to my feelings. - The feel of her hot breath. - The taste of her lips. - I know it's not pretty like you could write, but it's howmore...

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by adidasgal01/26/14

I'M LOVING IT

OMW! These poems are so addictive. Sweet, short and Exceedingly Hot!
** EROTICISM AT IT'S BEST **

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by DocSavage65601/02/14

I Loved It "So Completely"

Wow that was a passionate, loving composition that expresses the pain of loving someone so much it hurts.

I always look forward to your beautiful works that never disappoint the reader.

Please keep upmore...

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by todski2801/02/14

the final two lines

say so much,

"the feel of your skin beneath me",

making you the dominant, having your way with him, to fulfil your wants and desires,

"I want you so completely"

completely being such a broad definingmore...

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