so i can rest my elbow on her hip

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at one fifteen
I am all cracked
out
on cigarettes
and beer
and caffeine
and beef jerky
which I chew
very slowly until
it doesn't taste
like anything but
dead animal. My
eyes
are glazed over
from watching too many

cartoons and I have a
headache from not
drinking enough
beer to get a really good
buzz.

i suppose this poem
is a welcome distraction
but i'd rather have
my girl to curl
up against,
so I can rest my elbow
on her hipbone
and nestle my hand
between her small
breasts and sleepy
slip
into warm dreams
that smell like
the lotion she
rubs on her legs
after a shower.

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WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
I like this poem. I like it a lot.

I don't like the line breaks. Stop with the choppy line breaks or I will bitch slap you, DA. lol

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
Oh, the things I've chewed...

"very slowly until

it doesn't taste

like anything but

dead animal"

I'm curious about the lines breaks, although it doesn't matter.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Yeah

that " not drinking enough beer to get a buzz" headache sucks.

Never heard anyone else mention it.

I love the way this ends...with the lotion smell.

I like your stuff alot

Write on brother

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