VERY wet

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Our eyes met...
My panties got wet.

We kissed...
My pussy got wet.

We made love...
My sheets got wet.

Our relationship ended...
My pillowcase got wet.

Thinking of you now...
My eyes got,
VERY wet.

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Robbin_YoungRobbin_Youngover 10 years agoAuthor
???

Several of my poems have an 'H' next to them, including this one. Does anyone know what that symbol means?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
VERY wet

Love the emotion you share.

Robbin_YoungRobbin_Youngover 10 years agoAuthor
I'm "So" confused! ;-)

I did edit and re-submit my poem, without the word "So." Even before there were comments about possibly deleting the word, I'd thought the same thing. In all actuality, I never say "So" because I'm a bit overly dramatic (lol) and always write...sooo. But now I'm sooo confused and wondering if I should leave the "So" deleted, re-add "So" back into my poem, or add the word "Sooo" in it's place.

I don't usually ask for advice, but truly...I'm "So" confused, that your opinions would be greatly appreciated. Thank you, in advance!

Robbin

xoxo

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
To Robin Young

This is all just my opinion "so" I hope you aren't changing without serious thought on it. It is your piece, I was just putting fourth an opinion

TO Storiest

I considered that before I posted but for me the read was putting emphasis on the word so, which is a subjective amount. Wet by itself is also a subjective amount so the repetition is emphasising the central theme of the poem "wet"

As idea for casement it could have been so wet in the final stanza again this is all opinion. No ones words are gospel! especially mine.

StoriestStoriestover 10 years ago
Favorite poem I've read in a while

I like the word "so" included.

Without "so", the poem comes out a little disembodied, with less personality, letting the imagery speak more. With the word "so", it sounds like an actual person experienced these things, like wet affected someone's life over and over again. Right now, I think I like the latter better than the former.

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