VERY wet

byRobbin_Young©

Our eyes met...
My panties got wet.

We kissed...
My pussy got wet.

We made love...
My sheets got wet.

Our relationship ended...
My pillowcase got wet.

Thinking of you now...
My eyes got,
VERY wet.

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by Robbin_Young08/12/13

???

Several of my poems have an 'H' next to them, including this one. Does anyone know what that symbol means?

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by Anonymous08/11/13

VERY wet

Love the emotion you share.

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by Robbin_Young08/06/13

I'm "So" confused! ;-)

I did edit and re-submit my poem, without the word "So." Even before there were comments about possibly deleting the word, I'd thought the same thing. In all actuality, I never say "So" because I'm amore...

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by todski2808/06/13

To Robin Young

This is all just my opinion "so" I hope you aren't changing without serious thought on it. It is your piece, I was just putting fourth an opinion

TO Storiest
I considered that before I posted but formore...

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by Storiest08/06/13

Favorite poem I've read in a while

I like the word "so" included.

Without "so", the poem comes out a little disembodied, with less personality, letting the imagery speak more. With the word "so", it sounds like an actual person experiencedmore...

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