- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Soft Glow Moonlight
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Click hereSoft glow moonlight
drifting through the trees
meandering through the leaves
falling upon me in the starry sky
lighting the path before my very eye
The Forest dreams as I walk here,
Asleep yet Alive, it trembles
the Grandfather tree mumbles
as a breeze floats on by
telling me this is a good place to live and die
The lake itself reflects the Sentinel's Gaze
She stares and through here I see
this glorious beauty and serenity.
such Harmony is there to be found
just by trodding on Ancestral ground
In Soft Glow Moonlight
- COMMENTS
Urizielabout 13 years agoAuthorHe represents the forest resisting time and change, he is old and large and in the end peaceful yet stubborn, how I view the forest. He might have different meanings for others but that is what I felt when I wrote it.
Always aiming to please
-Uriziel-
UnderYourSpellabout 13 years agoA nice read and better constructed than many rhyming poems we see on here, Chip has already mentioned the typos and by the way what is a Grandfather tree? An old one?
Urizielabout 13 years agoAuthorChipbutty I'm afraid spelling has never been a strong suit of mine and being the writer tends to obscure those little mistakes but thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it!
buttersabout 13 years agoin a fantasyland kind of way, but i feel it would benefit from you rethinking the clichs, not worry so much about creating a rhyme, and making sure your typos are corrected.
you could take this little thing and make it prettier :)
typos:
and through here I see ... her, yes?
trodding - treading
if english is not your first language, then i commend your writing anyway. keep at it :)
