tagErotic PoetrySome Slow Eddy Where

Some Slow Eddy Where

byOpenField©

Ever my fingers imagine
Your delicate lips, how they part
Liquidly, like the slow wake
Of a flatboat poled up the bayou
Nestling into a bank where snakes
Could not possibly bite. I
Could bite you there, darling.
Yes, there would I bite you.

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by normal jean08/16/13

wonderful

images. I could envision your trip on the river. The only thing that bugs me is each line beginning with caps, but hey, its a great poem, who cares about caps, right? :)

excellent work

NJ

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