Somethin' got caught in my eye

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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The ex-High School Queen started to cry
Somethin had got caught in her eye
15 years ago she had dumped a guy
look he jes' entered ---handsome'n spry
she'd chosen a prize jerk over him --bye '
as realization ,remorse ,what-ifs flooded-o my !
she stifled her sobs with a lie
"Somethin's just got caught in my eye !"
Fifteen years seemed to fly
how could her cloudy vision not cry ??
the good times returned to flash by
then she forced herself to say "Hi"
after all now he was now her top Vendor guy --
they met over corporate meetings & in the sky
en route to trade fairs --he learnt her ex was bi
hard to control a smirk somewhat wry
second time round is not a pizza, cake or pie
you learn to be wary ,sift truth from lie
but life's bitter lessons had not passed her by
she was mucho nicer girl now than in days gone by
he had never married on the rebound or sly
wistfully she often wondered "why ?"
wished she had chosen him over her ex-guy
often she would look away & lie
"somethin's just got caught in my eye "
so readers you judge -did they giv' it a 2nd try?
i'll just end with a soulful ,yearnin' sigh
Becoz sumpn' jes' got caught in my flamin'eye !

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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4 Comments
twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
looks like a rehash of something done earlier

only with more bi-bye

Christ, or Krish if you prefer, I would have preferred Riverdale,, yeh, Reggie would have fit in, Jughead

3ed

erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
nicely done

even got some spanish in there

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
I'd guess....

she was into swish-y guys and couldn't see the forest for the trees with all that crap in her eyes..... Nicely done here....QQ

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
liked it

musta took forever to set up all those end rhymes