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Click hereHark my lover
Here she comes
Slither slither
Slithering shivering on sandy toes
Mincing mousey
Dicing dicey footfall
Anime animus
Honshu dance steps
Haiku of abandon
Rising as ghosts
Cold creekbed memories
Wet and cold
I was there
Only to warm her
A memory
Of memory
I must keep
An eye an ear
Kept half open
To ward away
Half meant promises
And disposable dreams
See see She dances
Away former lovers
Exactly as she arrives
Hark my lover
Ere she comes
Sliver sliver
Silver rings on slythy toes
Hippity hoppity
Down the bunny trail
Of abandon and adventure
The forbidden dance
Of secret lives wives and lies
Passing each other
As candles
At candlepass maypole
The trick with the flame
Keeping it aloft and alight
While the winds of change
Blow this winter night
A time
In time gone by
Remember to love
And love yourself
No one else will
You are ever alone
At the end of all things
Or even now
Mark my lover
Where she turns
Hither hither
Hintering on lies and lows
Alack alack
She retracts
Everything
Everall she said
Just as she said she would
Whenever someday came
Whatever of our past
Forever passed away
Leaving me behind
With confused shadows
Ill fitting form fitting
Fitting it should come to this
Despite all the spite and love
A line
Fine comb teeth words
So Raven and Hyena
Get the lasts word in
Nevermore
Har de har
Shoulda seen that one coming
For miles and miles and miles
you may want to consider making some lines longer due to the sprawl of the piece. it's just an opinion. i like this the best:
A line
Fine comb teeth words
So Raven and Hyena
Get the lasts word in
Nevermore
Har de har
Shoulda seen that one coming
For miles and miles and miles
that stanza has a nice setup and i can read it as if doing it aloud.
with each goodbye we learn to flower our own garden...you portrayed it well...
you are mentioned in today's reviews...hugZenharmony/blue