- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Sonnet to a whiskey bottle
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No promise ever served my needs so well
as this that takes me far away from here
and drops me in a valley made so dear
by mountains blocking all the rings of hell.
Euphoria my guide as I step forth
my beauty turning every head I see
now nought but witty thoughts are spoke by me
and troubles in my life bear weight no more.
The love I feel for Everyman shines out
in waves that emanate to all around
returning joy to me by leaps and bounds
and life is perfect; now there is no doubt.
The only promise ever kept to me
Was bottled by Jack Daniels Brewery!
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- COMMENTS
ishtatalmost 19 years agoBeer is made in Breweries, Whiskey in Distilleries. Sorry to be a pedant but it does stick out a bit.Otherwise I agree with Angeline et al.
evelyn_carrollalmost 19 years agoIt moves sonnets higher up my list of 'things to do'. I'll be using a single malt for the necessary further inspiration though. Really liked the mixture of sadness and smile and the consistent structure.
