Sorry (a suicide poem)

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jessy19
jessy19
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I woke up today
hiding my sorrow.
The day was nice outside,
I really wanted to wait until tomorrow.

I went on fighting the urge.
Keeping my smile,
swallowing my tears,
hoping I could be happy for a while.

As darkness approached,
I felt my fragile heart die.
I really wanted to see you today.
I really wanted to say goodbye.

I'm sorry.

jessy19
jessy19
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3 Comments
RossDanielsRossDanielsover 15 years ago
Put a lump in my throat.

Simple and so sad. Very powerful.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 17 years ago
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You sound so very sad in this poem. I hope this is just an exerise for you, and that you are not really sad. If you want to talk, drop me a message

xoxo

maria ( normal jean)

wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 17 years ago
poetry forum

i mentioned this poem in the new poem review thread in the poetry forum - wildsweetone