Soul Swapping

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I am swimming in, a bag of denial
drowning as, I'm going senial

Wanting to bolt, and run away from me
while wrapping myself, in everlasting ecstasy

Natural order and balance, they are gone
the light known as energy, it can not be shone

I know only sorrow, i can feel only pain
the calm centered stillness, it has turned into rain

My soul could float away, then only hope would remain
to stop my soul from swapping, on a ghostly plain

With my destiny unfolding, right before my eyes
i quickly put on my life jacket, and pray no-one dies

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
DEEP

VERY DEEP AND MOVING POEM. GREAT SUBMISSION

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
your own soul

You know where your soul is today?

Sitting here reading your messages

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
your own soul

You know where your soul is today?

Sitting here reading your messages

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
nice piece

A few too many commas and I

Have to say I think that ecstasy

is used too much in poetry but it

does kinda work here so i can let

that go, Over all I really enjoyed

this piece.

Good work,

thanks.

~ J

seranadeseranadealmost 19 years ago
soul

This poem illuminated from the soul and now shines.

Swapping yesterday for today!

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