tagErotic Poetryspeak, of heart

speak, of heart

bylive4passion©

ten thousand waves
of thought, end

telegraphed, in braille,
our secrets

do we share, a language?

djungle
speak, of heart

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by live4passion09/10/12

Very much so

No, not wasted greenmountaineer. Delightfully perceptive, and Very much so appreciated.

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by greenmountaineer09/09/12

i like the word play here
with punctuation where one wouldnt expect it

i think the line breaks
well chosen
served as punctuation too

am i being too presumptive here
suggesting the d before your jungle
themore...

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by tazz31709/09/12

THE HEARTS BEAT

pounding out a message, TK U MLJ LV NV

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