ten thousand waves
of thought, end
telegraphed, in braille,
our secrets
do we share, a language?
djungle
speak, of heart
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Very much so
No, not wasted greenmountaineer. Delightfully perceptive, and Very much so appreciated.
i like the word play here
with punctuation where one wouldnt expect it
i think the line breaks
well chosen
served as punctuation too
am i being too presumptive here
suggesting the d before your jungle
the phonetic equivalent of
the fun you may have had
with punctuation
or should I say
absence thereof
in as much as j
at the beginning of a sentence
in English has a d sound to it
i may be wrong
but i hope not
because i otherwise wasted a 5more...
THE HEARTS BEAT
pounding out a message, TK U MLJ LV NV
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