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Saturated
with cabbage roses
we swelter
grope and bask
say I undo your calm collected
beyond whiskey
and the din of disgruntled crack dealers
pleasure swells
a bra strap breaks
incidentals amount
with you inside me
I manage to believe
reality can fuck off

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Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 19 years ago
Says It All

'with you inside me

I manage to believe

reality can fuck off'

TY,BD

cantdogcantdogabout 19 years ago
Great stuff

I wish there weren't so many hundreds of thousands of poems here. This is pay dirt. I like it a lot, OMiss.

carsonshepherdcarsonshepherdabout 19 years ago
Makes me think

Of red wine nights sweltering under the broken fan.

Love it and you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
"...reality can fuck off..."

Awesome poem and easy to relate to. Great job, sexy~

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneabout 19 years ago
Ripe,

lush, and evocative of tangled sheets, damp skin, and liquid filled air. I love the imagery of the lovers' cocoon where you can and do believe the rest of the world can just fuck off. Terrific! Thanks.

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