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Click hereWTF? OMG!
Just who
do you think
you are?
Just what
are you trying
to say?
Make sense!
Make amends!
Make way!
You're PVC,
you're too PC,
you fail, you fade,
you're not like me!
You FUBAR fucking FUD.
A DUI, an SOB.
WTF? LOL!
Just what
are you trying
to prove?
Just why
are you flashing
your lack?
Lack of wit,
lack of tact,
lack of groove.
You're all PS,
you're PMS,
a BTW,
no more, no less
A parenthesis DOA
A nothingness
in looped excess.
with spree 2, I was looking for the magic of spree and this one was not as good for me. Perhaps it was the anachronyms, but it didn't soar like spree did. I think without the comparison to spree, this might have stood better alone. Perhaps a different title would free this one some.
although reminiscent of adrian cronauer a la "goodmorning vietnam", you didn't reach me. Wasn't connected at all.
sorry, babe.
Well, not quite. Sorry - couldn't resist. I like this snappy little poem.