Swipe to see who's online now!
Poem Info
PUBLIC BETA
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click herehe's whirling
unfocused
looks through at me
dances crazy circles
passes his hand
stirs up quiet
puddles of surface
disturbs my waterbirds
takes flight away from me
leaves me stranded
he spins away again
Please rate this poem
The author would appreciate your feedback.
- COMMENTS
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
1 Comments
LeBrozabout 17 years ago~~
I like a piece such as this that leaves so much to the reader's imagination; is it a child or some man {though some might ask, "What's the difference?"}
