Star-Crossed

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Would I were sick and you the cause
for that would mean that we had met
and perhaps kissed and perhaps paused

while picking out a dinette set
at Levitz, argued sentiment
and practicality, and yet

chose one, laughing, had it sent
to our small cottage, bright and new
and mortgaged. (Well, at least no rent!)

But I'm not sick, and nor are you.
We have not met, nor will, because
I live Red and you live Blue

or, like, the other way around.
In any case, in different towns.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Interesting ...

poem... makes one think.

beautyandwinebeautyandwineover 17 years ago
I just wanted to let you know...

..that I really enjoyed reading this.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Pure middle-america, from Levitz to those Red/Blue differences.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
a

well written sonnet with an interesting take on the phrase 'star-crossed lovers'

mentioned in today's new poem reviews

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