- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Still Life
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curl around a buttercup.
A fly buzzes.
- COMMENTS
Tzaraover 11 years agoWhether it is haiku, or senryu, or one of those other East Asian forms, I'll defer to those who know and care about those things.
For me it is simply an elegant, good poem.
Anonymousover 11 years agoWhat a fantastically surprising read. This does almost everything a haiku should do in English in my opinion. Very well done. xo
Angelineover 11 years agoThough haiku is not a form I've ever claimed to understand your poem strikes me as meeting the criteria for a good one. I love that it is very open to interpretation and the title works so well with what follows it. Thanks for posting it!
