- Erotic Poetry
- Stop It!
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Click hereStop it!
Yes,
you.
I see how you stand,
pose,
walk,
and sit
like there is no one else
that I should look at.
No legs for my eyes to track
the length of;
No hips for my tongue to brush
my lips o'er;
No breasts for my hands to want
to touch so much;
Just stop it!
You make me
want
you
right
now!
- COMMENTS
LilDarlinover 19 years agoI also saw the err mistake, but i still understood the poem and where it was going. It was great and i really enjoyed it..
Remecover 19 years agoAuthorYou're right. <sigh> Need to remember to proof one last time before clicking "SUBMIT"...I was picturing and thinking one thing and typing something else, apparently. Will have to make a Revision.
WickedEveover 19 years agoI don't get this: No hips for my tongue to brush my lips o'er;
I get "no hips for my tongue" and I get "no hips to brush my lips o'er." But the way it's written doesn't quite make sense. Maybe: No hips for my tongue, none to brush my lips o'er.
*no thermometer rating and I'm not purposely spacing between my letters. It's literotica!
