- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Strawberries and Cream
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My childhood was Viet Nam. The killing of women
and children. The incessant media coverage like small town gossip. Small town gossip like napalm and rice paddies. Intermittent bombings. Constant hunker and cover. No sleep. Our men are not frightened to fuck with mortar fire, not July fireworks, looming. Between my thighs an explosion of flesh and nerves. Bodies
everywhere. Pieces of men and women.
- COMMENTS
Desejoover 10 years agoI like the concept of this, and I like the way you use language. I also can relate to the subject matter - since it seems that half of my childhood was spent hearing about "gorillas" (as I heard it). Some specific points/suggestions: small town gossip like napalm and rice paddies. I don't think rice paddies works. The idea is good in that most villages have them - but I don't get the connection with gossip. The title is interesting because of the contrast, which is what I assume you intended to convey. I would have opted for something more typically 70s. Razzles? 5, for the record.
