Strawberry in the winter

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Strawberry
   Ripe and red
Flesh gives
   Under my touch
Too much give
   And it falls apart
Too firm
   And it fails to please
But this berry
   Perfection in red
Knife to skin
   Blade slices
Sweet juices
   Stain the cutting board
Scent of spring
   Taste of youth
Whispers on my tongue
   Hint of season to come

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
*****

I would shorten the title by leaving 'the' out, but I think this was an excellent first effort.

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Simple and elegant

This was simple and elegant, like a strawberry... or love.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
Interesting

this is where you want to go

Whispers on my tongue

Hint of season to come

it begins to say something wonderful

4ed