- Erotic Poetry
- Subatomic Terzanelle
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Click hereIn orbit, strewn with waiting, patient protons,
With you beneath – unaware my anxious hover.
Beaming light, my kisses touched like photons,
And quantum flux in wavelengths of a lover,
Are positively charged in spectrum’s hope.
Beneath my hungry stare and anxious hover,
Add neutrons, and my heart’s your isotope.
Creating radiation, banish dark –
So positively charged in spectrum’s hope –
Infecting every flavor of each quark,
Until they shake in subatomic lust,
And create that radiation – banished dark.
Adding electrons to your nuclear husk
Can ionize your will to spark a fusion.
They’ll vibrate you in subatomic lust
Swirling in subnuclear confusion.
In orbit, strewn with hope and patient protons,
Ionize your will to spark that fusion –
Lightly, as my kisses, touched by photons.
- COMMENTS
Gary Chambersover 20 years agoI voted on this a while back, but public comments weren't part of the Literotica experience back then. I visited Subatomic Terzanelle again today to refer another poet to it as an example of very good poetry using science as fodder for artistic imagination and expression. If there was a collection of the very best poems on Literotica, in my view this would have to be among them. Cordelia is among my Literotica heronies.
