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- Non-Erotic Poetry
- sublime
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inaudible melodies
invisible radiance
and distance expanding with time
rooting through musky
labyrinthine trenches
deeper and deeper and deeper – sublime?
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Rybkaover 20 years agoAnd; and deeper
Why not remove the "and" in the last line of the first strophe and an "and deeper" in the second?
