Subtraction

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fridayam
fridayam
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On my calculator, it doesn't make sense:-
X years times Y children
still makes a minus?
Is my app at fault?

But then there is no way to
calculate, no app to fathom,
what is left of life once
love is subtracted.

fridayam
fridayam
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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 10 years ago

Liked the word play. I think it's risky to make iconic references of modern pop culture in poems, but it works here. I think the fact that the poem is short and the two stanzas contrast so well with each other is why. I like it when a poem makes me think as much about format as it does the content. This does.

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 10 years ago
Bitter , true-life

Calculations !

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