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Sue Has a New Haircut

byTzara©

that becomes her age and face,
softens the veined inroads of gray, makes
her younger, makes me

remember I how once wanted her
spread like a clean tablecloth
off which my tongue would pluck breadcrumbs.

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by dogwatch03/06/14

The crumbs

Enjoyed your poem. Especially the last line as it raises so many fascinating questions in its imagery.

Crumbs were your sustenance? By choice? Was it enough?

To explore the entire spread with yourmore...

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