Summer Swells

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bluerains
bluerains
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Spindrift in springtide
opening whirlpools of passion,
drinking moisture from youthful dew.

As time torrents disappear
in battered bulging swells
penetralia deepens rifts.


Scattered beaches
bewail winds
of change.
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bluerains
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twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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blue, you have a real talent for alliteration. The poem is fine, this is a suggestion, check out either Norse or Welsh poetry, if you haven't done so already.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
swell

a swell poem blue, I love what you do with words with your mind painting.(~_*)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
minimalist

farewell to summer. Nicely done. I admit, I looked up "penetralia", I always like finding a word new to me.

Well done, blue.

Tess

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Cool, Smooth....

So gentle by nature....

cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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"As time torrents disappear"

Lovely.

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