- Erotic Poetry
- Sunrise
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Sunbeam balances,
Dances at the dawn;
Torn between loves lost,
And loves yet drawn.
In a heartbeat,
Sunrise ecstasy;
Seen through closed eyes,
A rainbow fantasy.
{Author's Note: This one was based on an experience I had while riding a ferry boat early one morning. For some peculiar reason, all quickie-, dawn- or boat-inspired orgasms have been associated with this little snippet of poetry, ever since. Hmm, I wonder why...)
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREalmost 17 years agoI can't believe that this one has not been commented on so far.
Like "The prodcut of her world" this one too share the strength of great observations - even as this one seems to float right on the border between the external vision and its internal image. Simple AND quality stuff. hard to reach for most. <P>
Unlike your preface to "The product of her world" which shed light on you and was helpful (if disturbing), your comments here opened me to understand more but without the extra hurtburn...<P>
Special thanks for breaking the snobbish/deffensive mold of the: "romantic-silent- poet" posture, by providing helpful comments. Regretfully, that arcane posture is stiil strongly held as if it was a safety object by most poem posters here.
