Sunset

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Colleen Thomas
Colleen Thomas
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When the sun sinks low
Its fire quenched by the sea
A glowing luminescence
Upon tranquility

An ocean breeze is blowing
Its sea scent fresh and crisp
Your dark locks are stirring
I catch a single wisp

Soft as any feather
I follow to its root
A place behind your oft-pierced ear
A sparkling pirate's loot

How many times I've plundered there
My depredations bold
Like swimming in the ocean
It never does get old

My fingers find that special place
Just above your hip
A single bit of pressure there
You bite your lower lip

The dying sun paints your skin
A brilliant copper tone
I nibble at your bejewelled ear
Until I hear you moan

A sound so soft and sexy
That no one else may hear
My fingers tips leap upward
To stroke more than just your ear

Your suit top strains to hold them
They’re longing to be free
A furtive glance to left and right
The beach belongs to you and me

A quick pull on the soft blue string
I watch the bow take flight
We must hurry now
To beat the coming of the night

My hands are itching for you
They each seize a silken globe
My lips return to the start
And tease your soft ear lobe

Soft nipples harden at my touch
I tease them with my fingers
Your head turns back and we do kiss
While the sun yet lingers

It happens in an instant
Your passion it ignites
You throw me to the ground and stand
In the dwindling light

It takes but a moment
Your treasure to lay bare
Pink and soft and glistening
I can only stare

The waves are rising higher now
As Luna rules their mood
You kneel and offer yourself to me
The perfect interlude

From first act to the second
We move with frightful speed
The sweetness on my lips tells me
Of your growing need

A musk both strong and fragrant
Overrules the briny sea
Your hips match the crashing waves
But they are breaking upon me

Without the faintest warning
The last ray does disappear
You cry out in starkest pleasure
But there’s no one left to hear

The sea is crashing harder now
The wind does wail and moan
I wrap you in our blanket
And we make our way back home

Colleen Thomas
Colleen Thomas
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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

A visual, sensual and lyrical delight.

don87654don87654almost 18 years ago
Great reading!

True love at sunset.

blakkattblakkattabout 20 years ago
Exquisite

Words that bring visions... visions that bring dreams. Exquisite pictures dancing in the mind.

BlackSnakeBlackSnakeabout 20 years ago
Thank you!

I'm not into erotic peotry, but yours made me think.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Nicely

restrained images with some interesting rhyming pairs. Very good.

jim :)

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