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Click hereThe sun sets slowly,
Lies at our feet,
Our silence golden,
Lost in the heat.
Passion growing,
Intense and complete,
Your whisper my calling,
In your eyes I do seek.
A hint, a glance,
So few do know,
Deeply you touch,
Desire does grow.
Oranges and reds,
Passions of life,
Cross the shadows,
I surrender no strife.
Your drawing is strong,
My ears hear your song,
Pulling me forward,
For you I long.
Time, no substance,
Only us two,
Lost in the moment,
Salvation new.
Dlt Aug 16 2004 copyright all rights reserved
this flowed so very well till the very end then curled up into an ending~
great word useage...impressive~
Without the count, you really pulled this off well. Still had a very nice flow to it. Filled with passion. The title sure fit :)
High 5!