- Erotic Poetry
- Surrender
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Her hand on my cheek
takes my breath away,
warm flesh whispers of
her essence.
Her taste on my lips
captures thought,
defying escape.
Her sigh is a river
of emotions, washing
away the debris of years.
Her eyes.
Oh, her eyes.
The smallest touch is epic,
a wildfire,
fed by smoke-edged
submission.
Her fingers make of me
a vessel,
pure transmittal of
desire.
Her tongue etches
tender wounds,
indelibly ingrained
onto flushed skin.
Ah, her mouth.
That cruel, sweet mouth.
Her kiss invites drowning,
passion swept currents,
undertow of primal need.
She is all,
Everything.
Her voice is a finely-honed
weapon, whisper shreds
defenses to leave me
trembling and open.
Her hunger is
animalistic, I am
ravished.
Devoured.
Finally, finally enfolded
in her gentle embrace.
I surrender.
3-21-07
- COMMENTS
darkerdreamerabout 17 years agoEnjoyed the jarring format of this poem, love to see highly-stylized pieces that work. A positive:
"Her tongue etches
tender wounds,
indelibly ingrained
onto flushed skin."
Best lines in the poem IMO. A negative: expressions like "Ah" seemed to take me out of the experience. <3
unapologeticabout 17 years agoI really enjoyed some of the imagery you put into this piece, especially this passage:
"The smallest touch is epic,
a wildfire,
fed by smoke-edged
submission."
