Surrender

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Hand upon hand.

Hot breath on my neck.

I shiver knowing what will happen next.

I try to speak.

Nothing comes out.

I want to kiss you.

You hold back.

Anticipation is killing me.

Gazes lock.

Lips part.

We move closer.

Closer.

Closer.

Our lips melt.

Tounges touch.

Lips travel.

travel.

travel.

I gasp.

I try to pull away.

Not wanting to give in.

I close my eyes.

A new sensation takes over my body.

I moan with delight.

Nails dig upon your back.

It builds and builds.

I can't take it no more.

I give in, and surrender.

I surrender to you.

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prettygirl35prettygirl35almost 12 years agoAuthor
I seem to....

.....type really fast at times. I need to stop that habit.

prettygirl35prettygirl35almost 12 years agoAuthor
Stupid spell check

*Tongues* Is that better????

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 12 years ago
Tounges touch ??

or "Tongues touch "??

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
SURRENDING MEANS NO QUARTER

nickels, dimes or pennies. TK U MLJ LV NV

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