Swan's Feet

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She is as graceful as the dawn
Lithe as the wind
Fluid as a river

To watch her dress
is to watch an angel put on wings

She moves through a crowded room
like a whisper through leaves

Her every move, motion, gesture and glance
is poetry put into form

I marvel at her

And yet I wonder,
how it can be
that my toes cry out for mercy
when we dance?

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twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 20 years ago
This is great

for what it is

nice lines, nice change of direction

very funny, caught me at the end

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Fine...

...effort. Love the contrast presented suddenly in the last verse! This poet progresses with every poem. Keep it going!

Edit 'a' to 'an' in 5th line, and 7th line to 'like a whisper through leaves.'

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