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Click hereShe is as graceful as the dawn
Lithe as the wind
Fluid as a river
To watch her dress
is to watch an angel put on wings
She moves through a crowded room
like a whisper through leaves
Her every move, motion, gesture and glance
is poetry put into form
I marvel at her
And yet I wonder,
how it can be
that my toes cry out for mercy
when we dance?
for what it is
nice lines, nice change of direction
very funny, caught me at the end
...effort. Love the contrast presented suddenly in the last verse! This poet progresses with every poem. Keep it going!
Edit 'a' to 'an' in 5th line, and 7th line to 'like a whisper through leaves.'