Swarm

bywakingDown©

Bedrock hammers above singing
So clear
And dear

A people secure in ignorance
So blind
And behind

Unaware of creeping nails digging
So silent
And violent

Soon the swarm will infest all
So fast
And last

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by HarryHill07/25/13

unusual, liked it

not sure what twelve means by dropping words into slots.

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by Angeline07/25/13

All three of your poems today are well written

but I think this is the best because it says a lot with few, simple words. I'm going to recommend your poems on the forum. Thank you for the read.

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by twelveoone07/25/13

see comment on other

otherwise 5
you are dropping words in slots,
align

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