Switching to Glide

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darkmaas
darkmaas
26 Followers

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You whisper soft
 "I'm a girl and you're a boy
You'll be hot so I'll play coy
We can arc across the dark
How damn hard can it be
to unwind those ties that bind?
Close your eyes
Let's fly blind"

But now there's only
wisps of vapour trails
over shadow land

We were just tourists
of each other's flesh
This crust of love
clings to hotel sheets
like duty free perfume
 "Wish you were here"

Free falling now
Blind eyes open wide
Falling free
I'm switching to glide


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darkmaas
darkmaas
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AngelineAngelineover 15 years ago
Yes, it's very good

and seems infused with undercurrents of meaning to me, meaning that could go in various directions which is what good poetry must do. The crust that clings to sheets like duty free perfume is the best part, imho. Again, fraught with meaning and great, precise imagery. :-)

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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Your poem has been mentioned on the review thread for Thursday.