tagErotic PoetryTake Me Elsewhere

Take Me Elsewhere

byRazzRajen©

Lighted tapers....dripped wax....
Forlorn Trees and calm waters....
Sounds echoing over the glassy mirror
Is that an eye looking up?
Gurgles...groans....warbles whispers.....
softed thuds and small yelps....
A Cat? a Kitty? an over grown bush?.....
The limbs were stretched taut between trunks....
akimbo stood the arms and legs....
Open, inviting....
who was the Looker watching quietly,
silently the drips slid down
and then the patter of the hissing heat
as it touched crumpled, wrinkled surfaces....
why Does He Revert.....
never a negative was heard
But Yet she stays.....
                      Held in place
...Nay fixed immobile till the Word was given.....

Report Story

byRazzRajen© 0 comments/ 3070 views/ 0 favorites

Share the love

Report a Bug

1 Pages:1

Please Rate This Submission:

Please Rate This Submission:

  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Please wait
Recent
Comments
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

There are no recent comments  - Click here to add a comment to this poem

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel