Taking A Step

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This was writen by joeys-game, RedHairedandFriendly and Tom Collins

joeys-Game and Redhairedandfriendly

joey
Often when I’m feeling down
I kind of come off like a clown
That’s only because if I was me
Someone might accidentally see

Red
But if you take my hand tonight
I'll take you on a lovely flight
Of heartfelt wishes, hopes and dreams
That mean the world to you and me.

Do not hide from me just yet.
I've not got out my butterfly net.
I wish to take you far away.
We'll come back another day.


joeys-game and Tom Collins

joey
Often when I’m feeling down
I kind of come off like a clown
That’s only because if I was me
Someone might accidentally see

Tom
When you're down my heart cries
When you clown I see your lies
When you're not you
I seek your colours true

I go searching inside
Delving past your pride
Knowing there is so much more
I need the key to open the door

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Truely good poems

they need to be played in the blues style and listned to while slowly and methodically getting drunk in a quiet bar!

dreamcatcher7dreamcatcher7almost 17 years ago
really good

a big well done and thankyou for this

MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailabout 18 years ago
I like steps

enjoin your rite <winkz

hugo_samhugo_samabout 18 years ago
Interesting

Unusual play of two solutions to a common theme. Good contrast and well done. Thanks all three of you.

Hugo

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