tagErotic PoetryTaking you higher (sadism)

Taking you higher (sadism)

bysubwryter©

I take you
past high
into the darkness
I take you
you prick you
when i'm not around

I take you
deep depths
into the sounlessness
I take you
don't touch you
when i've been around

Taking you higher
Taking you higher
let it out
hand on neck
black out

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by Anonymous

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by subwryter02/27/13

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Sorry it is suppose to be soundlessness.I know I look at these before posting them. Plus you prick is suppose to mean both that the masochist is inflicting pain alone and is a prick because of it.

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by Quivering_Quill02/27/13

Uncharted Waters

A bit confused with the line: you prick you..... Do you mean the person is a prick, or that they prick themselves for enjoyment? Not clear.... Also, check your spelling of soullessness. Thanks for sharingmore...

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