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Click hereDid you ever have those days, smithpeter
when you were so blue the day turned to black
shades of existence coloring your world
in the absence of light.
A bullet would take away this pain
malignant growth lodged tight in heart
that no physician living or dead
can excise
A rope would do the trick
leave the strange fruit, hanging
from a deciduous tree in the fall
choking on words that grasp no air
while leaves shower in the struggle
Better perhaps to walk into that cool green
leave the trees to their proclivities
cartridges in their chambers
search for that great physician
that healed you
Very touching, expressive, reminded me of many friends that didn't go look for the physician. The images are amazing, so evocative -
and I ADORE Billie Holliday.
Great job!
yeah, that sequence in the movie, the song,
Great but despondent , dark imagery ---- days like this happens to the best of men .......
this is good, but poetry escapes us
now, if your anything like me, you get inside
this is not where you want to be, even for 18 lines, trust me
caught the billie holliday ref.