- Erotic Poetry
- Taste
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Click hereThe perineum, halfway between heaven and nirvana
A wet path licked down to the forbidden
That secret cave where I taste the ridges of her starfish
Or the path up where tight heat
Pulls my mouth like a moth to flame
Folds hide her pearl, that hidden treasure
Wanting to be found
I bring her to life as her heart
Beats out the rhythm of creation
One last plunge and the biblical flood
Washes over my tongue as reality stops
Le petite mort
The little death
- COMMENTS
MaiDawtonsover 14 years agoI have now read both of your poems and found both to be simply amazing. I have just submitted my first poem today and have not written a poem in years. You have inspired me to let my creativity shine.....I just hope someday I can write like this!!!
twelveooneabout 16 years agoyou would do better with four lines:
The perineum, halfway between heaven and nirvana/
A wet path licked down to the forbidden/
That secret cave where I taste the ridges of her starfish/
One last plunge and the biblical flood/
Drop word secret (it's not, and next to cave)- pearls are so overplayed. Explore the difference between heaven and nirvana? Is there?
