Tenses

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Tipson
Tipson
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             I.

It will be nice feeling
 your body pressed against me
as we lay in be and make
 long lasting love, listening
to our synchronized breath,
 enjoying how our voices are lost
in each other's mouths.  Feeling our
 tongues battle, and our scences blast as
we touch and push into each other.  

             II.

 It is nice now the smell
of the ocean, and the sound of
 the waves crashing.  The water feels cool
as it surrounds my bare feet and your
 knees.  My cock feels great embedded in
your mouth, and I can see your nipples
 getting hard thanks to the caressing
of the wind.  I get jelous of it, but only
 for a little bit.  Your mouth steals away
my attention, as you moan around my member
 and once again I look down to notice your
fingers working their magic on your throbbing
 clit.  I see you shake and I cum.  

             III.

It was nice driving with you
 the top open in my car, and the night wind
enveloping us.  Your top removed, my fingers
 massaging your breasts, squeezing your nipples.
You hiked up your skirt and even
 though it was dark, I could still notice
the wet spot on you panties.  I pulled the car
 over.  No cars in sight in the desolate
freeway.  We moved to the back sit and you got
 into position and bent over the car.  Half
of your body outside, and your tits
 freely hanging.  My cock felt uncomfortable
in it's prison.  I released it.  No need
 to think twice, so I plunged all the way into
you in one move.  I did it hard and fast, and
 you still came as well as I.  I remember
remembering the whole drive your loud
 moans, and your head moving side to side.
Your hair a mess, more
 from sex than from the wind.      
    
 

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Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Nice look...

into the past, present and future.

angelicminxangelicminxalmost 19 years ago
I agree with Jennifer

It has potential, and certainly could have used an edit. Keep writing! ~Minx

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
This was a nice piece

and i think it has lots of potential

but it could benefit from some editing,

or getting a literotica editor to look it

over, but all in all it's a very good effort

and that is just my opinion.

Keep writing.

~ J