tagNon-Erotic Poetryterms of surrender

terms of surrender

bylive4passion©

surrender unto ways of old in struggle, must we stand alone, raise
battlements in shifting sand suspicion builds, and guides our hand

surrender unto shadowed fear, in dust heart withered flowing tears
allow no things to grow, salt sewn, doubt claims our lives its own

surrender unto thought proud borne, raised cry of declaration worn
as thin as air, yet truth, the blood still runs from those we slew

surrender unto conscience blind drawn room is darkened yet to find
deceit lies in despairs embrace, in comforts name with hidden face

surrender unto killing fields a lone one treads, untrusted, wields
no fear all weapons cast aside with true intent face does not hide

surrender unto trust unknown determined thought heart boldly shown
in outstretched arms revealed, on high both hands held unconcealed

one hand is held with nothing shown, closed in grasp, hollow stone
silence threat to all, self bound intent, wells hidden underground

the other hand is opened wide, emptiness can nothing hide in offer
promise, dreams fulfilled, gives form to yearning, heart is willed

rendered are the views eyes filled with doubt, scorn, suspect ruse
our hands can hold, no thing, can loose, we have no choice and yet

must choose our; terms of surrender

Report Story

bylive4passion© 0 comments/ 1126 views/ 0 favorites

Share the love

Report a Bug

1 Pages:1

Please Rate This Submission:

Please Rate This Submission:

  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Please wait
Recent
Comments
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

There are no recent comments  - Click here to add a comment to this poem

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel