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Click hereMakes me sad
to pick a dad
from a catalog
Want my boi’s baby
not some orgasmic
genetic similarities
can’t be helped
my boi’s my man
with the wrong plumbing
This is a good poem and this part is great: orgasmic genetic similarities. I think the last line really detracts from the poem.
Such a tiny poem but it conveys so much sadness. The love and despair and longing shine through.
I didn't really LOVE it, but it isn't bad, but def not a 5, but to assure you I am not your one- bomber, here is a 5 from me. Good luck with your writing.